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    dots Submission Name: Casedots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 25
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 639



    Description:
       I miss him:(


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    dotsCasedots
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    protect me
    promise me you won't leave.
    protect me
    if I'm scared hold me

    I want to feel safe again
    You said you could.
    protect me.
    like you said you would.

    I need to be me.
    The girl you sometimes hate.
    I need you to stand by me.
    and give more than you take.

    protect me.
    I won't be this way for long.
    one day I'll stop feeling weak.
    one day I wil be strong.

    so protect me.
    I doubt anyone eles will do.
    If you protect me now,
    one day, I'll protect you.




    Submitted on 2009-10-30 08:09:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       u know i will, win something feels this right u must fight for it, but how can u fight win your hands are tide. how can i, by just bing a fall back on. u want your secret 2 die with u. so i must stay out. but the one thing u shout no is give the word and i will take all the hits. ask me and i will do anything at all just 2 see u smile. just be there next Sunday.
    | Posted on 2009-10-30 00:00:00 | by cshv | [ Reply to This ]


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