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    dots Submission Name: Daggerdots
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    Author: alyssajl
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Description:
        Trying to say that the light helped them through until something severe happened, and then it left. But, when they tried to commit suicide the light came back to help.


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    While i walked along a dark, lonely, and empty path i noticed a light.
    It helped me see, it wasn't so bad, and the path felt like home.
    Then i fell and landed on something that felt like a dagger tearing into my side,
    All of a sudden the light had gone, and left me when i needed it most.
    Now the pain holds agony, the feeling of home is gone.
    I screamed while pulling the dagger from my side, i stumbled, and kept on walking.
    I couldn't stand the pain, the blood, and all the loneliness mixed in together.
    I went searching for something sharp, As i fumbled around i found a knife beneath my feet.
    The light returned.




    Submitted on 2009-10-30 09:01:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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