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    dots Submission Name: I Trieddots
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    Author: alyssajl
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    Description:
        They tried to get help from someone, but they wanted no part of them so they ignored while not noticing they were. and now that its done they dont why they had commited suicide, and all they can do is sit and wonder.


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    Agonizing, petrified pain with no cause, and in all i see, i see no flaws. Reaching out to you has never been enough.
    Horrid, terrifying thoughts come at ease, but with all those thoughts, i never thought i'd beg with plead.
    alone and empty is at best.
    Guiltless, twisted lies said over and over, you never try, you never see. But with all that's done, there's no apology.
    I tried to tell you, i tried to show. I needed you, but you were too cold. Now i lie, while people cry.
    But yet you stare, and wonder why.




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