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    dots Submission Name: (Random Love piece)dots
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    Author: Bubba52
    Elite Ratio:    0.23 - 0/0/4
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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    Description:
       I asked Patrick out today and i am afraid he will breakup with me.


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    dots(Random Love piece)dots
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    I looked up beaming my baby blue eyes at Patrick's face. His eyes were a slippery gray and the russet color of his face i love is replaced by a violent pale cream. His arm is place gently around my waist leading me to the lunch table.
    " Breath Aubree" He instructs me. I exhaled and felt the warmth start up in my cheeks. Patrick sits me down and under the table he puts his fingers threw mine.
    " Wuts up" Patrick's eyes turned back to that familiar brown and his russet color was noticeable. I stared at him for a long time. He took my face and gently kissed me on the forehead.
    "don't worry about me" He said softly.




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