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    dots Submission Name: Senior Yeardots
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    Author: Plegias
    ASL Info:    17/ male/ my house
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 37/23/40
    Words: 221
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       Senior year of high school, "parting is such sweet sorrow"- Shakespeare


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    dotsSenior Yeardots
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    Time's flown by so fast,
    Thirteen years, seemingly nonexistent,
    So many years at education's mast,
    And even Our first year, not so distant.

    We congregated as one,
    We massed as many,
    We have had much fun,
    And We have conquered this city!

    We've grown to learn, We've grown to love,
    We've succumbed to laugh, We've broke down and cried,
    We've stood up for Ourselves, We've given others a starting shove,
    We've lived to help all, and We, in someone's loving arms, died.

    We have faced the good,
    We have faced the bad,
    We've done what we could,
    Then We procrastinated... only just a tad.

    Now here We stand,
    In Our robes and gowns of pride,
    Let Our victory be known throughout the land,
    And never let Our Hearts be flushed by the tide.

    Yet We have only just started Our Journey,
    Here, We cannot let It end,
    We must always stick to It aptly,
    And on this, Our Journey, continually ascend.

    So with this,
    Those of you from far and wide,
    Know that you have made this trip a bliss,
    And We shall remember you always, inside.

    Now, my friends,
    I wish to say "Adieu",
    But your importance shan't ever meet ends,
    We now give our life once more to You.




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