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    dots Submission Name: Just Incase You Didn't Know...dots
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    Author: amanda99737
    ASL Info:    16/Girl/Alaska
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 14/52/75
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
    Total Views: 26
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 694



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       I've been listening to too many love songs...


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    dotsJust Incase You Didn't Know...dots
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    Just incase you didn't know...

    Just in case you didn't know they call me the drifter.

    Or so a lot of people told me.

    Just incase you didn't know a lot of people are lonely and sorrowful.

    Or so a lot of people told me.

    Just incase you didn't know, I'm not pretty, tall or graceful.

    Or so a lot of people told me.

    Just incase you didn't know, I noticed you're lonely...

    And just incase you didn't know, we could be lonely together...

    And just incase you didn't know, I wrote this letter to tell you that I love you.




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