Tyburn... is that something im missing, because for the life of me i cant seem to think of what it is. I even googled it just now, and its a village... So that makes me even more unsure, but i can still tell you what i thought about this piece.
maybe
or the two lines of it...
It was rather mysterious, eerie. "cry to die" confused me for a split second until i figured what the hell i guess it fits.
And considering there are only ywo lines and i have no idea what the form was supposed to be, i guess that is all for my comment.
Just trying to help, but im not sure if i really did
~Channie
Submission Name: Forcefully
