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    dots Submission Name: I Thoughtdots
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    Author: RachelAnastasia
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsI Thoughtdots
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    I Thought I could never find
    another lover like mine.
    I hope this is everlasting
    Stride.
    You put me above the rest
    Your Soul Your Pride.
    I could sit hear and cry, of all the reasons why.
    From day to day,
    it's still getting better.
    I fear if we shall ever end.
    I can't enjoy if lonely is my bestfriend.
    But I shall overcome
    My fears of losing what we have.
    I Thought I was alone
    Depressed with life, tremendously sad
    You Have brighten my day
    Your the sunshine to my life.
    I am happy but im not in love
    My heart is broken,
    and it's closed down for repair,
    Still feeling as it was torn
    When I was breathless you were my wind
    You love me so much,
    it could be a sin.
    I thought you were my friend,
    but you are so much more.
    My angel
    when im hurt and sore.
    You ease my pain,
    Faster than an Advil.
    It's almost 10 till
    and I Thought I would be sleep
    but I thought about you and the feelings
    within had to be shared, I could not keep.




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