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    Author: ashleyfrederick
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/2/5
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Story/The pain inside
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    I can see the light ahead of me.
    it is dimming to just a soft glow.
    as i hold this shard of glass in my hand,
    i press it's sharp edge to my throat.

    i can feel my muscles tightening because of the pain
    but it does not matter.
    because this has no effect on me
    like the one you left.

    i press even harder i can feel it break a layer of skin.
    i push just enough to let me bleed out.
    my death will be slow.
    so i can watch the fading light grow smaller and smaller,
    as i take my final breaths.





    Submitted on 2009-11-01 11:48:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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