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    dots Submission Name: No Need For Friendshipsdots
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    Author: LovelyGoddess
    ASL Info:    21/F/SC
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 138/94/104
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
    Total Views: 13
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    dotsNo Need For Friendshipsdots
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    The friends I have lost, never will I regain.
    The time I spent on "friends" seems all too lame.
    Is it a game? To them, friendship is a game.
    Something they abandon when they don't maintain.
    I'm spent from falsely acclaimed companionship.
    Can't believe I endured even to this extent.
    I refuse to abuse the right to be used.
    I'll live alone in life if I have to be bruised.
    Keep to myself, although I'm not one of them.
    Done with them, I'll march onward in front of them.
    Blunt sins, I'm imperfect like everyone else.
    I don't need any friends. I'll stay by myself.




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