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I Owe You

Author: trynfinity
ASL Info:    38/f/California
Elite Ratio:    4.43 - 149 /145 /91
Words: 233
Class/Type: Poetry /The pain inside
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I touch you and you shiver
you start to turn away.
But stop your mind now racing
what to do so you can stay.

I Owe You

I touch you and you shiver
you start to turn away.
But stop your mind now racing
what to do so you can stay.
Touching me it bores you
it's a turn off through and through.
There is nothing to make you want me
pretending is getting hard to do.
You've tried weed and porno
trying to alter your sight and mind.
But nothing makes me better
It wouldn't help if you were blind.
I try to show you that I want you
I try to be something a little more.
But all you see is I fail you
ending up turned off continuously bored.
I hate what I now am to you
what I see reflected in your eyes.
The person you can't stand to touch
and you're starting to despise.
I never wanted to be like this
never wanted to be for you this bad.
I thought that I could love you enough
I wouldn't be the worst thing you ever had.
But time has proven me oh so wrong
I cannot be worth your time.
I cannot be the one you want
I don't deserve you to be mine.
I'm sorry that I failed you
for all that I've done so wrong.
I wanted to be so much more
but I've been a mistake now all along.

Heather Kemper
October 29,2009

Submitted on 2009-11-01 18:12:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  wow did the person say all that or jus the mind thats strives to strike at perfection.this is a good write but its sad.yep but i amglad its long ago 2009 and past now.
| Posted on 2011-04-10 00:00:00 | by Temidayo | [ Reply to This ]

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