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    dots Submission Name: Mirror Mirrordots
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    Author: trynfinity
    ASL Info:    32/f/California
    Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 124/117/77
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
    Total Views: 28
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 888



    Description:
       Mirror mirror on the wall
    tell me what you see.
    Do you see the exact same things
    that I when I look at me?


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    dotsMirror Mirrordots
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    Mirror mirror on the wall
    tell me what you see.
    Do you see the exact same things
    that I when I look at me?

    I see a total failure
    a mistake that never should have been.
    Someone who didn't deserve his love
    who doesn't deserve to live.

    I see someone who's ugly
    who cannot be desired because of that.
    Someone who isn't worthy
    a mere disappointment and that's the facts.

    I see a desperate person
    who knows she can't be loved.
    Who knew no matter how hard he tried
    he'd leave because of who she was.

    Someone who fails the ones that love her
    embarrass them all in time.
    So mirror mirror tell me please
    is the reflection you see inside?


    Heather Kemper
    October 28,2009




    Submitted on 2009-11-01 18:13:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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