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    dots Submission Name: Hhidingdots
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    Author: Beulah
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 584/409/43
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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       haunted...


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    dotsHhidingdots
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    your shadow
    hovers
    inexplicably
    uninvited
    over this
    blossoming
    rapture
    of newfound
    courage and
    neglegted
    faith




    Submitted on 2009-11-02 01:43:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hi liefkind. Yes so the Past is sometimes always a Shadow on the H orisons but it stays a Shadow without Power because that s what Shadows are for to make this Moment in Future a Ashining moment to be the more Brighter and the Shadow becomes No Shadow only a dim Memory in Obscurity. Love U Dad.
    | Posted on 2009-11-02 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]


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