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    dots Submission Name: hidingdots

    Author: Beulah
    Elite Ratio:    4.78 - 588/414/44
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    your shadow
    over this
    of newfound
    courage and

    Submitted on 2009-11-02 01:43:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the past haunts the future...the shadow is big...it is hard to love again once we have been hurt.

    i like the attitude in this toward the shadow...like..."you don't belong here" i am finding my faith in love again...i am a strong person now...you don't belong here, and i have the courage to forget about you.

    | Posted on 2012-08-12 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      Hi liefkind. Yes so the Past is sometimes always a Shadow on the H orisons but it stays a Shadow without Power because that s what Shadows are for to make this Moment in Future a Ashining moment to be the more Brighter and the Shadow becomes No Shadow only a dim Memory in Obscurity. Love U Dad.
    | Posted on 2009-11-02 00:00:00 | by Joachim | [ Reply to This ]

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