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Submission Name: The Emotions Stirred dots

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Author:	Childe-Wrote
Elite Ratio:	1.78 - 17/53/44
Words:	144

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	987
Average Vote:	4.0000
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The Emotions Stirred dots

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You don't know how I'm feeling
This heart you are stealing

My emotions stirr inside
And screaming is my mind

Don't tell me what is not
How can you not see it in my eyes
And forever plus a day, I'm by your side

Trembling when I am near
And confusion when I am far

I cannot say how I feel
But I really do care

When I'm hanging on that rope
And I'm trying too hard to cope

My heart screams 'I love you'
My mind screams 'It's far too soon'

I can see it in your eyes
Our friendship will never fade

When our time is up and paid
And we go our seperate ways
When everything is not said

It all will soon lead to my dismay
When you finally walk away

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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