Find The Soul To Forgive by Childe-Wrote

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Author:	Childe-Wrote
Elite Ratio:	1.86 - 17/47/39
Words:	109

Class/Type:	Poetry/Sorry
Total Views:	27
Average Vote:	4.0000
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The words they speak
Behind our backs they go

My chin is up high
With this broken pride

I try to find the words
Yet they refuse to be heard

I replay it over and over
Yet this apology still remains

Breaking down this barrier
Pushing aside my deepest shame

I blurt out what time had seeked
Yet it all was in such vain

Falling to these scarred knees
Broken, torn and rejected

Tears make up for a wounded heart
And these scars replace the simple pain

If you let the demons win
You might as well give up the fight

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