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Submission Name: sandwich baggie blues dots

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Author:	Runes
Elite Ratio:	5.8 - 268/229/100
Words:	133

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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sandwich baggie blues dots

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I can't believe he sells me this shit;
I can't believe I actually buy it.
A whore and a hag to the ziplock bag;
he says, "New," and I just gotta try it.

Seeds and stems make half the weight.
Then I must sift through the shake,
net just over a quarter my sticky bud order...
9 grams is an ounce to this flake!

I swear every burn is the last one;
I can't keep depleting my cash fund.
Down to that last hit, I keep swearing I'll quit,
but I can't bear living without some.

So now I'm just boarding up rooms,
hanging rows of fluorescent tubes,
and come next September I hope he remembers
why he gets left out of the Boom.

Submitted on 2009-11-02 15:56:42 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  so most of your poems are lim-ricky like this and that journal im guessing? I sure hope so, you have a way with it. oh, and as an avid indulger in the finer vices, I can certainly agree to the taunts of the sand-wich sack.

smoke for my sanity, love for my heart
| Posted on 2009-11-07 00:00:00 | by Passionbyapathy | [ Reply to This ]
  Yea i [censored]in hate it when theres more stems and seeds than meat to the package, that just ticks me off haha, hard to get a good quality these days but ja what can you do? I loved this!
| Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]
  I actually really enjoyed this. It's funny but true to the unique problems in the life of the Chronic. The flow is nicely consistent, and of the kind that could easily be put to music. I don't remember all the types of poetry, but the word Limerick is hanging in my head when I read this one. It reminds me of years gone by, trying to get the most out of what was available, experimenting with types and with methods of delivery. Sometimes it was nearly all-consuming. There is a whole culture devoted to this lifestyle, a culture often simplified by those who have not lived it.

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| Posted on 2009-11-02 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]

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