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    dots Submission Name: Ice On My Souldots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 75/182/213
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 447
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    Description:
       Today was the worst day of my life. I am destined for an abyss that I might not get out of for a long long long time.

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    dotsIce On My Souldots
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    I can't hear the violins, that soothing sad song, I wish I just could hear it again.

    Captivated by the tragedy in day to day existence, oh how it eats away at me.

    Encroaching is the feeling of digging an early grave.

    Only God knows how far I will truly fall.

    No one can tell me I didn't give it my all.

    Misery - Despair

    Yes today I felt like I died.

    Since you must know I seen myself fall into deep.

    Only God knows how I will survive the day.

    Understand my life will do nothing but fade.

    Live and let live, poor and poverished.




    Submitted on 2009-11-02 16:37:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      sorry about your day. it's tough when they don't work out so right.

    don't know if i get your title. though i know how it feels when your soul is burning away, bits at a time.

    it's also a difficult when there are no clear options, no easy way out. how it can sufficate. and still, you dig deeper.

    it's not easy getting out of the hole. but it can be done. and it takes time to put all that dirt back.

    it gets better. it always gets better if you make an active choice.

    sometimes i truly believe that only God knows. 'cause most of the time, i really haven't a clue.

    just some thoughts.

    stay tuff.
    | Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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