Description: It's about a Cigar-smoking, egotistical, self-centered, too loud-for-his-own-good type of boy. I don't know how common the phrase "This aint no picnic" is, but he said it all the time, like it never got old or something... Any thoughts?
This Aint No Picninc -------------------------------------------
I hate your stupid phrase
the one you thought
applied to everything
that I was beginning
but how right you were
you still have no idea
like you still don’t
about what went wrong
it wasn’t a walk in the park
when you babbled on and on
or when you rambled about
how you never want to marry
there were no blue skies
when you dropped me off
on the corner of my street
like you couldn’t go more
no chirping birds sang
when your chapped lips
found mine or when your
tongue lingered inside
definitely no soft breeze
blew in my face as your
stocky cigar scent invaded
my nose, eyes, and mouth
no cozy blanket lay beneath
our awkward body’s as your
hands found my hair and
tangled clumsily to tear
to put it quite frankly
into your fried brain
I will just say, you’re right
this really isn’t a picnic.
Submission Name: This Aint No Picninc
