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    dots Submission Name: bloody kissesdots
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    Author: mellonieheart
    ASL Info:    18 f tx
    Elite Ratio:    0.91 - 1/3/10
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 16
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1021



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    dotsbloody kissesdots
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    Bloody kisses

    From sharp lips

    A love affair

    That seems to be sick

    Razors and wrists

    Just watch

    As the red flood

    Letters and notes

    Goodbyes written with blood

    Found on the bathroom floor

    Tears were shed

    Blames made

    Ones who never cared came

    You never was there to hold his hand

    Never was there to hear her cries

    Made fun

    Labeled them

    Bullied, Abused

    Shouted, Screamed

    Cussed, Stabbed their backs

    Now you're crying

    You started this love affair

    Razors and wrists

    Knives and pens

    Bodies filled the graveyard

    An Outcast

    A Hated Son

    A Troubled Kid

    A Wonderful Person

    That You Have KILLED




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