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    dots Submission Name: lifedots
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    Author: brokenbylove
    ASL Info:    23/m/australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.37 - 62/249/222
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 24
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    Bytes: 841



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    im frozen in place, by this lovely face
    its like a light cutting through the night
    i've been waiting for you my entire life
    a moment like this, my soul is cut like a knife
    i know your the one, i know this is it
    i found what i was looking for
    your that perfect rose growing amongst the weeds
    no longer will i bleed
    no longer will i die each day
    i look at your lovely face
    i can feel my loneliness slipping away
    i can feel the call of fate
    that you are my lifelong mate
    i was falling down
    you caught me in your arms
    set me free from my chains of pain
    i know im going to be fine
    no longer walking a thin line
    knife or life?
    day or night?
    your the one for me
    you have saved me





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