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    dots Submission Name: Let the Heart Leaddots
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    Author: MysterydarkPoet
    ASL Info:    18/f/Aust
    Elite Ratio:    3.28 - 155/259/141
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 12
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    Bytes: 634



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    dotsLet the Heart Leaddots
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    I could hold you for an eternity,
    with a heart that will never be completly mine-

    because it's what i can not hold,
    that i call divine,
    it's what is so rich with passion-
    & fresh with a soaring breeze
    That sets me free, so that I may fly,
    & that keeps me strong
    from waves that would tear my soul away,
    but now only rinse it of fear-
    all so that i may feel at home.
    home and safe,
    with such a fickle ember of love to burn.

    for it's my heart that beats regardless-
    without care or thought in mind.




    Submitted on 2009-11-03 08:17:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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