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    dots Submission Name: when it rainsdots
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    Author: mellonieheart
    ASL Info:    18 f tx
    Elite Ratio:    0.91 - 1/3/10
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 21
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 678



    Description:
       Whether it’s the fact I haven’t completely accepted my mother’s passing or if it’s what mister **** told me? I wish I hadn’t listened or wondered what he wanted to tell me then maybe I’d feel okay.


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    When it rains I cry
    Because no one will see my tears
    When it rains I take a breath
    It washes away my fears
    When it rains I smile
    To make them think that I’m okay

    When it rains
    I want to dance with you
    When it rains
    I feel so calm serenity over takes me
    When it rains
    The scares disappear beneath its glossy shelter

    When it rains
    My heart skips a beat because i feel alone
    When it rains
    My head spins searching for someone
    When it rains
    I think of him and if what he said is true
    When it rains
    All I want is to be with you




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