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    dots Submission Name: Scaresdots
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    Author: mellonieheart
    ASL Info:    18 f tx
    Elite Ratio:    0.91 - 1/3/10
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 24
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 737



    Description:
       something I relate to very well that I wish to forget but it makes me who I am try and judge me try and call me names and see where it leads you ... everyone has scares from something you can’t always make them go away but you can prepare yourself for the future that is before you.


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    You look at yourself so many scares

    But that is what makes you who you are

    The scares on your wrist and up your arms

    The scars on your chest and in your heart

    The scares on you face from fight long gone

    The scares on your back form and abusive
    past

    The scares that you long to make disappear

    Scares that will always be right there

    The scares that remind you who you where

    The scare that determine who you will be

    The scares that have yet been made by
    destiny

    The past and the present are what they are but the future will only cause more scares .




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