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    dots Submission Name: Stilettosdots
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    Author: Algol46
    ASL Info:    200/m/East of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    2.73 - 1066/1177/572
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Misc/Romance
    Total Views: 20
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 341



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    dots Stilettosdots
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    Her sharp stilettos clicked toward me,
    Red skimpy skirt and top she wore,
    Young girl who eyed me warily,
    Her sharp stilettos clicked toward me,
    She offered her love for a fee
    The blood rushed to my ears a roar.
    Her sharp stilettos clicked toward me,
    Red skimpy skirt and top she wore.




    Submitted on 2009-11-03 10:55:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Excellent! This delightful poem evokes strong word and sound pictures! One can just picture a lovely lass with skimpy skirt, come hither smile, and spice heels *sigh*!

    Another outstanding write from you!
    | Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      great discription. I loved how you describe everything. It was great.
    -Rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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