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    dots Submission Name: have you ever?dots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 12
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 615



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       "Have you ever heard the wolf cry to the blue corn moon? Or asked the grinning bobcat why he grinned? Can you sing with all the voices of the mountion? can you paint with all the colors of the wind?"
    "Colors of the wind"
    -Pocahontas(disney movie)-


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    I get this feeling.
    these dry tears fall from my eyes.
    have you ever seen the raindrops
    fall back into the sky?

    I hear your voice at night
    It dances in my head.
    have you ever felt so lonely
    when your alone inside your bed?

    I make the stars shine brighter.
    You know I hate the dark.
    have you ever cried alone
    and wish you had no heart?

    I wish the world would spin slower.
    so we could always stay together.
    sometimes I wished it would stop.
    have you ever?







    Submitted on 2009-11-03 11:31:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Yes I have. Wonderful poem. I give it a 10 - 10 on my scale here lol. Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by KindredSpirit | [ Reply to This ]


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