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    dots Submission Name: Crimson blood and poison tearsdots
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    Author: mellonieheart
    ASL Info:    18 f tx
    Elite Ratio:    0.91 - 1/3/10
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 18
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 869



    Description:
       I wrote this poem because I feel like no one knows my pain. I write poetry to get away from my life in general and to express emotions to myself.. cause I can't share them any where else.


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    dotsCrimson blood and poison tearsdots
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    Rain, rain, go away,
    Because of you the pain will stay.
    Slit my throat, cut out my heart,
    Leave me here, tear it apart.

    Poison tears stream down my face,
    My heart beats at a steady pace
    As I try to stand again;
    Alone and standing in the rain.

    I don’t need you anymore…
    Is what I think while tears pour.
    I hate you like I hate my life;
    But love is what cuts like a knife.

    Love is death and death is you;
    Its pain stains like a black tattoo.
    Those memories come back again
    And bind me in the ropes of pain.

    Crimson blood streams down my head
    Like a long, silk ribbon, tied by a thread,
    To a platinum bullet, a hole in my skull…

    ...Now just a memory that’s faded and dull.






    Submitted on 2009-11-03 11:38:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow...this speaks volumes
    | Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by bloddyrazorgirl | [ Reply to This ]


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