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    dots Submission Name: My dreamdots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 14
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 598



    Description:
       "you can be a sweet dream or a beautiful nightmare. either way I don't want to wake-up from you. sweet dream or a beautiful nightmare. somebody pinch me. your love is too good to be true.My gulity pleasure,I ain't going nowhere. baby long as you're there I'll be floating on air...."
    -Sweet Dreams-
    by: Beyonce


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    dotsMy dreamdots
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    You are more than a thought
    you're more than a clouded memory.
    you got the whole new world
    for me to go and see.

    I leave my drama and my hurt
    my plans and my hopes.
    I leave everything behind.
    It won't matter where we go.

    I don't need the wind to howl.
    you don't need the stars to shine.
    all we need to do.
    is go to bed and close our eyes.

    I love the way you're there.
    the way it only seems.
    you are my prefect place to escape.
    my prefect dream.




    Submitted on 2009-11-03 13:12:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like your talent, and the way you can instinctively incorporate emotion and feeling with your poetry. That is what poetry should do; demonstrate feeling and drama through skillful phrasing and writing.

    Nice work, pretty lady!

    | Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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