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    dots Submission Name: 100 ways to say " I love you"dots

    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dots100 ways to say " I love you"dots

    I love you.
    how boring does that get sometimes?
    to say it over and over again
    to want more then what you try.

    I want you.
    to come up with 100 ways.
    to say I love you.
    so we will be more in love in days.

    I need you.
    in your weak moments and all.
    I came up with 100 ways to say
    I won't ever let you fall.

    I'll yell them from the roof top
    so they travel in the air.
    to let you know my darling.
    I will always be there.

    100 ways all floating around.
    so hold me like you do
    then starting back at one.
    I whisper "I love you"

    Submitted on 2009-11-03 13:21:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You have a developing talent that is delightful, Rachi!

    There are hundreds of ways to say "I love you", but none beats the original version which you so eloquently indicate in your poem.

    Three little words that mean so much when they're spoken by the right person!
    | Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      Brilliant. I enjoyed reading this, not because of cliché, but because its unique in its own way. Awesomeness. FAV!!!!
    | Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by KindredSpirit | [ Reply to This ]

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