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    dots Submission Name: Deeply Into Placedots
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    Author: KindredSpirit
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Burlington Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 46/71/89
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 20
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsDeeply Into Placedots
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    Time seems to halt,
    And pause for the moment...
    While we stare deeply
    Into each others eyes.

    Though we remain true,
    Our love is all that binds...
    Together we're different
    But I'd never tell you lies.

    We share one thing,
    That keeps us here...
    The fact we love to love each other
    And thats all we need.

    Different we may be,
    But it matters not...
    Without you my baby
    These wrists I would bleed.

    Though time seems to halt,
    It is us at fault.
    And through time and space,
    Our love will fall deeply into place.




    Submitted on 2009-11-03 13:30:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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