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    dots Submission Name: Sugar Coated Kissesdots
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    Author: bloddyrazorgirl
    ASL Info:    18/f/az
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 37/34/40
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 14
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 575



    Description:
       this is written to my ex Chris Bronson


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    dotsSugar Coated Kissesdots
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    I can say I'm sorry and wrap it up
    In sugar coated kisses
    Yeah I can take my pretty little words
    From these journal pages here
    Twist them up so they taste sweeter
    But if I did that would it ever change
    You and the games that you play
    Because I'm pretty sure you'd still be
    The same guy who took adavntage of me
    So I'm going to take my sugar coated kisses
    And all these pretty little words
    Save them up for the day I find some one new
    Who actually deserves them unlike you




    Submitted on 2009-11-03 15:37:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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