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    Author: bloddyrazorgirl
    ASL Info:    18/f/az
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 37/34/40
    Words: 125
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 15
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 696



    Description:
       written to my bf who cant seem to make time for me


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    Look at me, sitting on a shelf
    Like some pretty china doll
    Waiting for him to realize
    That I am not a china doll
    I'm not the type of girl to wait
    Sitting up on a shelf
    Waiting all night
    To be made part of his life
    And bay I don't care if you have friends
    All I want is to be as important
    As all of them
    I just want to know
    That you still love me
    And the way you show me that
    Is to make time for me
    And don't you know it hurts
    To have to fight for time
    When you were the one who said
    That you were mine
    Come on baby can i just be
    A priority




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