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    dots Submission Name: Love Or Insanitydots
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    Author: LovelyGoddess
    ASL Info:    21/F/SC
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 138/94/104
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsLove Or Insanitydots
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    A dripping fountain of lust secured and cornered
    tender and sweet the perfume of your scent
    that decorated your form in an array of brilliant sunshine
    piercing the way I felt and shooting
    all but gracefully through my enthralled veins
    until I became the picture of a blushing bride
    decorated and dipped in a coral shade
    luscious and alluring lips, those amorous eyes
    bubbling brook of utterance with ears ringing for reply
    engaging and rapturous song uplifting
    my dancing, intoxicated spirit into a whirlwind
    of intricate, distinct, and befuddled emotions
    bewitching, benevolent charm that entangled
    a willing, surprised, and tingling vessel
    claiming me to be a lost, ardent, and dreaming object
    incoherent and unaware of the poetry that proclaims
    delicacy, mellowness, and affection
    and stalking your lonely, enticing silhouette with
    passionate, eager, and hungry eyes and
    weaving the thin, fine, and delicate
    line between love and insanity




    Submitted on 2009-11-03 16:57:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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