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Author:	Runes
Elite Ratio:	5.8 - 268/229/100
Words:	21

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a whore's epitaph dots

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They called it dirty money,
but my conscience is clean ---
I never hurt anyone making it
except myself.

Submitted on 2009-11-03 17:06:02 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  I love your hair so soaken wet,
as it comes through my living room door.
Its what many raincoats stay dry for.

You are my favorite whore. You can sleep in the garage if you like.

MyX
| Posted on 2009-11-09 00:00:00 | by MyX | [ Reply to This ]
  And, in fact, it wasn't even you making it, even if you spent it. It was your evil twin, the one you conjured up whenever you put on your high-heeled shoes.
| Posted on 2009-11-05 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]
  'if Jesus loved Mary Magdalene
then God will love me
(at least I never prostituted myself
for love)'
| Posted on 2009-11-04 00:00:00 | by AlyRose | [ Reply to This ]
  ~And everyone you gave syphilis to.

Hmmm......

Interesting write. It reminded me of a book I read once. The Crimson Petal and the White.
| Posted on 2009-11-04 00:00:00 | by was_i_ever_real | [ Reply to This ]

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