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    dots Submission Name: Who needs you?dots
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    Author: Katsi039tsahente
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 4/17/25
    Words: 251
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Friendship
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    Description:
       This is just stuff on my mind about what happen to my friendship with my friend so i really don't have a description for this.


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    dotsWho needs you?dots
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    As I face the day.
    I wait till you come around.

    Then I ask.....
    Why do I need you if all you do is leave me?
    You act as if you don't know,
    But really you feel like screaming out.
    Get a life you stupid emo girl!
    And I know it
    So why even hide it?

    Now that I see how you really are.
    I step back and look at our friendship.
    And I realize that you were using me.
    Were no more.

    I need a real friend not just a user.
    It makes me laugh to think about this.
    Because you're a user and you might not know this,
    But all your so called friends and followers.
    Are really just using you like how you used me.

    I know that I don't need you because
    //_o*O_o*^_^ is all I need
    This is obviously not you.

    And I do have a life.
    And yes I am a emo girl.
    And yes I could be stupid sometimes,
    But thats what makes me me
    And if you can't handle me just look the other way.

    So as I face the day.
    I look you in the face and say.
    "If you truly care you'll just stop this bull shit"

    Till tomorrow I will love and hate you with all my mite.

    I will never change for you or for anyone.
    So just stop trying to change me!




    Submitted on 2009-11-03 17:29:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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