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Author:	Vermalin
Elite Ratio:	4.94 - 10/10/16
Words:	69

Class/Type:	Poetry/
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I wrote this when I was in a difficult state. I'm not there anymore, but I still would like to share this with you. I did move on, but doesn't mean I'm going to take this down. It's a moment of... Reflection. ^_^

Cretin

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I am the fool,
that doesn't know when to stop.
I am the idiot,
who needs to keep her mouth shut.
I am the moron,
that needs to stop babbling.
I am the fool,
who doesn't know how to let go.
I am the idiot,
that can't get it right.
I am the moron,
who wishes for too much.
I am the fool,
that needs to move on.

Submitted on 2009-11-03 18:09:38 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Well, it's very clear that you feel at guilt.
That somehow not being to just push away your lingering feelings makes you foolish, idiotic.
Immature, even.

But love isn't like paper. You can't just fold it away somewhere and move it.
It leaves a lasting indention in your soul.

And the stronger you love, the stronger the pain is afterwards.
I love too strongly, as well. I relate. It's because we feel so deeply.
Which can be a positive or negative thing, depending the situation.

But it's always an enriching thing, I'd rather be able to feel pain so deeply, and meaningfully then to never feel it at all.

You're not a fool for holding on to something that matters to you. In fact, you're quite the opposite for even being able to see what you must do.

Most people can't even come to the place the you've come to Emily. Being fully aware that it is over, you may still wish for it not to be, but you're atleast honest with yourself.
And you're trying. That's all that matters, you're trying. Which most people couldn't attest to.

It's going to take time, you know that. Don't beat yourself up for not moving on over night. It only shows that you really cared.

And you haven't wished for too much, the bad thing about falling in love is sometimes we fall in love with someone who can't give up everything we need, or the other way around, we can't give them everything they need.
So, sometimes we have to let go.

But remember, your dream person is always out there.

Hun, you don't babble, every word you say has always been beautiful to me.
You can't do anything do anything, wrong. Remember? It's just somethin' you have to work through.

But, on the poem. I do like it, as always. It's a very bitter piece, a very frustated piece.
But a very emotional and beautiful piece.
| Posted on 2009-11-03 00:00:00 | by Eyamma | [ Reply to This ]

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