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Submission Name: Dreamers dots

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Author:	LovelyGoddess
ASL Info:	21/F/SC
Elite Ratio:	2.69 - 138/94/104
Words:	69

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	12
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Dreamers dots

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What is reality?
What is real?
Not me and not this
world that I live in.
I'm tempted to give in
and give up hope.
Walk, not float
amongst shining stars.
Who am I?
Where am I?
What can I be
in a world full of scars?
The future is what I seek.
I am seeking redemption
in my descension.
This downward spiral
it's all just a dream.

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