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    dots Submission Name: Craving the Sunsetdots
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    Author: LovelyGoddess
    ASL Info:    21/F/SC
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 138/94/104
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsCraving the Sunsetdots
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    Dreaming of twilight, the night
    when you do not exist in my mind.
    For the day your existence in my
    world begins to cease and the case
    rests beneath the covers of denied
    memories. When your presence is
    no longer required, sadly and subtly
    let go, let to drip dry away because
    you have become too much for me
    to handle.




    Submitted on 2009-11-03 18:44:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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