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    Author: LovelyGoddess
    ASL Info:    21/F/SC
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 138/94/104
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 17
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    Twinkle, twinkle
    precious star.

    I wonder so much
    what you are.

    Far above
    the world so high.

    I dare to dream
    to touch that sky.

    Delicate star
    in all your grace.

    How I'd strive
    to take your place.

    To be beautiful,
    yes, loved.

    To be admired
    in starlight above.

    Please bestow me
    with your hope.

    So I may be able
    to deal and cope

    with not being
    where you are

    or being loved,
    oh little star.




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