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    dots Submission Name: Sin to Be Crazydots
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    Author: LovelyGoddess
    ASL Info:    21/F/SC
    Elite Ratio:    2.69 - 138/94/104
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSin to Be Crazydots
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    The clock is broken
    and the time stands still.
    This is my valued token
    and this is the bill.
    I see those things that
    they say aren't real.
    The feeling hurt brings
    for me, cannot be healed.
    It singes my soul like fire
    and freezes my body like ice.
    Life is a gambling game
    where I'm holding the dice.
    The time constantly ticking,
    clicking slowly away.
    I live for the moment,
    but I die for the day.
    Prideful possessions I hold
    in this room, contained.
    Questioning the humanity
    whether humane or not.
    My perceptions are altered
    in here where I rot.
    I cannot bare to breathe
    I cannot think to see.
    Sanity leaves my mind
    along with the mentality.
    These padded walls
    they keep me trapped in.
    Is being crazy even
    really a sin?




    Submitted on 2009-11-03 18:51:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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