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    dots Submission Name: My Angeldots
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    Author: Ivellios
    ASL Info:    17/M/Montana
    Elite Ratio:    1.23 - 1/2/6
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 24
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 432



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    dotsMy Angeldots
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    You are my life,
    My angel
    You are my love,
    My reason

    You show me the good
    And you show me the bad
    But everything fades away
    When we are together

    Your wings
    Soft and warm
    Your heart
    Large and radiating

    Our hearts beat for each other
    Our hearts beat for one
    When I see you next to me
    I know you’re the one




    Submitted on 2009-11-03 21:29:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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