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Dreaming


Author: arod44
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Words: 145
Class/Type: Poetry /Dark
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It's about the way I feel when I'm dreaming, because to me dreams are sort of an escape.. I wrote for my own entertainment, not meaning for anyone else to hear but now that i think of it it's kind of an ehh poem. Any thoughts for a revision?


Dreaming



the night penetrates into my soul
consumes my thoughts into one
creates vivid images that run
ahead of time with no reason

they play in me and I am there
the sounds are mute yet I hear
the faces are blurry but I know
yet when morning comes I don’t

my eyes are forced shut but I see
my senses are numb but I feel
my lips are paired but I speak
my body is vulnerable as I sleep

the thoughts that were suppressed
become alive and chase me through
the open vast of oblivion that is
my mind when it is susceptible

my name is unknown to me but
in this dream I know who I am
though I am a third object I watch
as she makes her way into desire




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