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    dots Submission Name: Unstable Liesdots
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    Author: KindredSpirit
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Burlington Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 46/71/89
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 27
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsUnstable Liesdots
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    How hard could it possibly be
    Keep it real and say what you think.
    Are you that ignorant to believe
    You're shit really smells like roses?

    If you could keep a line in truth,
    Maybe some how some way we could make a link.
    Do you really believe that your model perfect
    And the time is nye to strike up poses?

    I think fuck you
    And your unstable lies.
    I don't want
    What can't be said.

    I think your putrid
    And you should rot while your head swarms with flies.
    Fuck your unstable lies,
    Thats all you can do to get ahead.

    News flash bitch... I'm blunt and don't give a flying fuck.
    You think your the shit because you can take a dick!?
    Just to let you know, your in a mud hole! You're Stuck.
    So go ahead,
    Call me an asshole, better yet a prick.




    Submitted on 2009-11-04 01:01:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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