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    dots Submission Name: Digital Ferrymandots
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    Author: CrypticBard
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 271/249/134
    Words: 74
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsDigital Ferrymandots
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    Up on screen I hear them scream,
    bright and vibrant, happy and sad-
    words and stanzas on a digital pad.
    I will always remember your poetry.

    Within your verses each line offers
    wonders - mysteries of thought,
    universalities in observations caught.
    I will always remember your expression.

    A frequent flyer, expectant passenger,
    beyond the distant shores I travel;
    safely aboard your verbose vessel.
    I shall always remember your name.




    Submitted on 2009-11-04 05:03:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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