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    dots Submission Name: For Austin and Annadots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 27
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    Bytes: 1055



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       "smile like you mean it."
    -killers-


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    dotsFor Austin and Annadots
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    I heard today about her.
    the news stopped me in my tracks.
    I knew that this would happen.
    There's no way to hold you back.

    you are incredible and talented.
    so thats why I couldn't see
    girls weren't begging for you.
    and caused you such misery.

    to your new-found sunlight.
    Anna, such a pretty name.
    treat my muse with love.
    and he'll love you just the same.

    You guys deserve eachother.
    I'm not saying that because I'm mad.
    aussi, you're so incredible
    and deserve to feel glad.

    I hope this little poem.
    makes you smile at her with love.
    I know you and her are happy.
    and that's all you're dreaming of.

    so friends stick by eachother.
    no matter how it hurts.
    I will smile like I mean it.
    cus that's how friendship works.














    Submitted on 2009-11-04 08:47:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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