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    dots Submission Name: "Erato"dots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 24
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 795



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       Erato is the muse of love poetry.


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    dots"Erato"dots
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    I call you this.
    You a muse of love.
    my amazing man
    the guy I think of.

    My heart
    you make it stop and go.
    I love how you make me smile.
    and how I can never say no.

    those time we laugh for hours
    or those times we just lie together.
    doing nothing at all.
    just dreaming of forever.

    I never believed in love.
    I always thought it was only fake.
    then you came along.
    you gave more than I could take.

    sometimes it's too sweet
    and we fight to sour it up.
    but there has never been a time.
    where we both fall out of love.

    to you my muse.
    do what you do.
    I hope you remeber me
    you Erato you.




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