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    dots Submission Name: I will not cry!dots
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    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    16 going on 17
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 174/201/192
    Words: 193
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 25
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    Bytes: 1216



    Description:
       when losing your best friend to a pretty girl, remind yourself you have someone who loves you.


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    dotsI will not cry!dots
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    I order myself to stop.
    I tell myself he is doing better.
    so what if he found someone who was prefect
    they were meant to be together.

    a personal hell.
    I need my love to save me now.
    the coldness hurts my heart.
    I fall all the way down.

    tell everyone to shut-up.
    just leave me alone.
    I hate watching him with her.
    but that something I should of known.

    I can't cry for him.
    I can't be angry even though I want.
    when he asked for love
    nothing is what he got.

    so don't cry you idoit
    I yell at myself.
    he deserves to be happy.
    and I deserve to go through hell.

    I curl up with my true love.
    and he wraps his arms around me.
    then when I stop crying.
    whispers words of wisdom "let it be"

    he is truely something amazing
    he knows just what to say.
    so I lost my chance with my best friend.
    I still have yesterday.

    today however is my case
    and together we will try.
    forever seems short with him.
    so I will not cry!





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