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    dots Submission Name: Stupid Boydots
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    Author: bloddyrazorgirl
    ASL Info:    18/f/az
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 37/34/40
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 19
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 454



    Description:
       umm idk just something i wrote


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    dotsStupid Boydots
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    Stupid boy open your eyes
    You’re giving her a headache
    Trying to change her mind
    Can’t you see she’s tired
    Of all your fucking lies
    Can't you see that she’s happier
    With him by her side
    Stupid boy open your ears
    She’s telling you that she’s
    Finally getting over you dear
    She’s screaming it out
    So that you can hear
    The words I HATE YOU
    Loud and clear




    Submitted on 2009-11-04 15:23:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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