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    dots Submission Name: Alonedots
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    Author: Emerging Soul
    ASL Info:    45/VERY female/Wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    4.36 - 1238/1114/243
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 23
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 569



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    dotsAlonedots
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    Today I am here
    yet gone far away
    in a vision of alcohol blur
    I am someone else
    hiding from myself

    The need inside of me burns
    yet the tears battle
    against things unsaid
    too much out there
    among the noise
    of what is me

    I pull and pull against myself
    on both sides of the rope
    which one is the real me?
    Which one provides hope?

    Who am I
    Who have I become
    Who do I want to be

    Who have I been?

    Alone




    Submitted on 2009-11-04 15:39:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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