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    dots Submission Name: Brightest Kind Of Flamedots
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    Author: bloddyrazorgirl
    ASL Info:    18/f/az
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 37/34/40
    Words: 293
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Angry
    Total Views: 25
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 1869



    Description:
       written to chris bronson who was 23 when i lost my virginity with him...i was 16...so it pissed me off that he would take advantage of me like that though it was consentual...this is like my payback song


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    dotsBrightest Kind Of Flamedots
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    You think you're so special sweetie
    Because you've got the girl of your dreams
    Standing outside your apartment door
    But let me tell you something baby
    This girl isn't sweet sixteen
    And the way we used to play games
    Is about to change

    Chorus: Love flashes like the brightest kind of flame
    But I'm telling you I'm not gettting burned today
    You're playing with the hottest kind of fire
    Better take your hands off me
    Or you're going to get hurt

    I can see the way you're thinking tonight
    Is going to be in your control
    This may be your place but this is my game
    And there's no way I'm letting you win
    So come a little closer let me tell you something
    I'm going to lie, tell you I miss you
    And you're going to take it like the honest truth
    But I'm going to use it to take advantage of you
    Because...

    Chorus

    I'm not losing this time baby
    So stop trying to play all your fucking games
    I'm here to be manipulative
    Just like you were when I was sweet sixteen
    And you stole my virginity from me
    And let me tell you I am so sick of you and your lies
    Telling me you miss me and want me in your life
    Because we both know I'm just the last call
    When you need a little something sweet
    But I am done with being your little toy
    So I'm getting even with you tonight

    Love flashes like the brightest kind of flame
    But I'm telling you I'm not getting burned today
    You're playing with the hottest kind of fire
    And you're never going to take your hands off me
    So you're getting burned




    Submitted on 2009-11-04 15:50:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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