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    dots Submission Name: I give you my heartdots
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    Author: Katsi039tsahente
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 4/17/25
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       For all that I went through For all that I lost I give you the last thing that wasn't taking away and give it to you. I hope you will take it......


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    I would give you my trust,
    But it's already gone.

    I would share my secrets,
    But tell were already spoking.

    I would show my love,
    But it was taking away.

    So I give you my heart,
    But promise you won't brake it.




    Submitted on 2009-11-04 16:29:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Everyone wishes to love and be loved. The risk in falling in love/being in love is a treacherous path. You give your heart hoping it will not be broken but must know that there is a risk that it will. There is no guarantee that anyone you love will not betray your heart and not break it. But being in love is one of the best feelings in the world.
    Although short and sweet it's a very lovely write.

    Krys
    | Posted on 2009-11-12 00:00:00 | by takenspiritwind | [ Reply to This ]
      Maybe I will and I hope it work out how your saying it will.
    | Posted on 2009-11-08 00:00:00 | by Katsi039tsahente | [ Reply to This ]
      Give your heart to yourself. You are the only one you can truly relay on and when you find out just who you are someone will come along and love you for you. Time is on our side, after all it never stops ticking.
    | Posted on 2009-11-06 00:00:00 | by mandy dupuis | [ Reply to This ]


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